Friday, 16 May 2014

Joseph's Writing

16 May
In the park

One afternoon Ashia and her Mum went to the park. Ashia wanted to go on the big slide. Mum shouted, "Wait!" But Ashia ran and started to climb...

A few hours later..... "Ashia  where are you!" said Ashia's Mum oh do please come out. Ashia's Mum heard a noise in the city she saw the big brat it ate Ashia. Ashia's Mum ran into a cave but it wasn't a cave it was a volcano. Oh no!!!!! said Ashia's mum the volcano erupted, everyone and everything did not survive except for Ashia's Mum...........THE END.

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